The Ridiculously Radiant Rainbow Book full of Parkhill Gold


 

Here are some wonderful pieces that have entered.


Rayden 6U

“A great diary Rayden! You really showed empathy for the character. It will be even better once you edit the redrafted version.” Ms Uppal

 

 

 Amirah 6W

“Well done Amirah, you have labelled the phases of the moon accurately.”  Mrs Wakefield

 

 

  Samiha 4K

“Excellent maths work and well done for challenging yourself with exchanging questions!​”  Mrs Krizsanyik

 

 

Amreen 4K

“Well done, Amreen, your dialogue was well written and very engaging!” Mrs Krizsanyik

 

Ria 4K

“You used great words for said in your dialogue, good work, Ria!”  Mrs Krizsanyik

Amara 4K 

“You used some great vocabulary to describe Thanatos, well done Amara!”  Mrs Krizsanyik

Alizay 4K

“Well done, Alizay, a beautiful inner monologue that shows how Virgo was feeling!”  Mrs Krizsanyik

Shayan 3S

“Pristine handwriting and fantastic choice of vocabulary. While I read this I felt like I was there.” Mrs Simms.

Rayden 6U

“Well done Rayden, for working logically and systematically!” Ms Uppal

Maryiah 3S

“Fantastic narrative. I can feel your character’s emotions. ”  Mrs Simms

Shruuthy 3S

 “Great mathematical method for crossing the the hundreds.” Mrs Simms

for the wonderful work that will be completed